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NaruSaku story preview by ~Rioux911:iconRioux911:



NaruSaku Preview

‘Where am I?’ she thought. ‘What is this darkness I’ve never experienced before? What? What happened?’ then, all of a sudden she awoke! “NARUTOO!”  Screaming out but one word. It hit her with such a force, almost like a train hitting a car that was on the tracks, rolling it aside and crushing it like it was a toy. She tried to remember, thinking as hard as she could. Straining every brain cell she had for a few brief moments until. She remembered.

He accidentally set a trap, as her and her beloved blond haired teammate, were walking through the corridors of one of Orochimaru’s hideouts.

*Flashback*
‘Gasp’ “Naruto! Watch out! Just because Orichimaru is dead doesn’t mean all of the traps are gone! Pay better attention!” said Sakura
“Sorry Sakura-chan… I didn’t mean too…” said Naruto
‘Aww… Now I went and made him sad… What are you doing Sakura! He does all these nice things for you and all you do in return is barely help him. And then you make him feel bad!’ she thought to herself.
“I’m sorry Naruto-kun… It’s just I don’t want you to get hurt…” said Sakura
“D-Did you just say N-Naruto-kun?!” said Naruto
‘Oh shit!’ thought Sakura
“S-Sakura-chan?!”
Completely embarrassed Sakura punches him, sending him flying, evidently landing in another trap. This time though the trap went off… Hundreds of kunai came flying at Sakura too fast for her to get out of the way. She cowered in fear, just when she thought it was the end an orange flash came in front of her. Shielding her from the kunai. Tears streaming down both of their faces he spoke as clearly as he could.
“Sakura-chan… I… L…” was all that came out before he passed out. Colliding heads together knocked out Sakura in the process.
*End of Flashback*
©2009-2010 ~Rioux911
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Author's Comments

Just a preview, I want to know what people think of it before I go ahead and finish the whole story... I can't even think of a title right now so... Well just tell me what you think...

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:iconajpwnr101:
kool i wonder what happens next!

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:iconrioux911:
Hah... lol yeh so do I! :XD:
I'm lazy so don't expect much too quickly out of something that small and insignificant... ^^;
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Song of my day-> Good Charlotte- The Anthem
Why NaruSaku?- :[link]
:[link] Thats why.
:iconajpwnr101:
lol still cool though

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:iconrioux911:
Lol, I may work on it a bit. I'm going up north to my cottage next week all week... And there is no internet no cell phone reception no anything basically... So I probably will spend my time writing a lot... But maybe not who knows...

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Song of my day-> Good Charlotte- The Anthem
Why NaruSaku?- :[link]
:[link] Thats why.
:iconajpwnr101:
lol still looking forward to it though

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:iconrioux911:
Okay, I shall try my best to do it then, now that I have people that actually want me too! :lmao:
:onfire:Ashton:onfire:

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Song of my day-> Good Charlotte- The Anthem
Why NaruSaku?- :[link]
:[link] Thats why.
:iconcookiimonster:
We want more
We want more
We want more

Well i do, please finish the story :iconawwwplz:

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Warning my englisch sucks :heart:
:iconrioux911:
Agh, people are finding me on here... Not cool, now I have to write. :XD:
Well, I shall try to do something. May take me a while as I am fairly busy around these times... Homework and practice and such. ^^;
But thanks for the fav! =p

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Song of my day-> Good Charlotte- The Anthem
Why NaruSaku?- :[link]
:[link] Thats why.
:iconcookiimonster:
no problem

yes you have too write! XD
and if you're good at making story's like you are :meow:
people will find you :D

I'm very busy with homework too :noes:

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Love is like Heaven

But can hurt like Hell


Warning my englisch sucks :heart:
:iconrioux911:
Thanks. :)
And I shall try to find time and write, see what I can come up with... Maybe during honors English since we will be writing a lot, I could write a story for here during it, who knows... ^^;

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Song of my day-> Good Charlotte- The Anthem
Why NaruSaku?- :[link]
:[link] Thats why.

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